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I am happy
Can't you see?
My mind seems to have nothing but the simple thoughts of you in them
~Wondering if you are okay-wounder if you would like this.
My nose takes the scent of you, as you walk past me each and every time
~Giving a friendly smiles as you do this~
My eyes just seemed to be glued to you, drawn into your brown eyes
~Taking in your features- almost drawing my own mental picture of you~
My lips speak nothing but you
~"How are you today?"~
My hand touches you and gives me butterflies and a deep sense of warmth
Can't you see.
That you are almost all of me already.
Can't you see?
My mind seems to have nothing but the simple thoughts of you in them
~Wondering if you are okay-wounder if you would like this.
My nose takes the scent of you, as you walk past me each and every time
~Giving a friendly smiles as you do this~
My eyes just seemed to be glued to you, drawn into your brown eyes
~Taking in your features- almost drawing my own mental picture of you~
My lips speak nothing but you
~"How are you today?"~
My hand touches you and gives me butterflies and a deep sense of warmth
Can't you see.
That you are almost all of me already.
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Here is another poem. I really hope you guys like it.
Please leave a comment and tell me what you think. X3
Please leave a comment and tell me what you think. X3
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Its so pure and touching QwQ
I think the way you write has gotten even better OAO Its draws me into the writing more. Idk....maybe the way you wrote the sentences or something xD
I love the way you made love seem. I probably wouldn't have thought of someone I love pretty much taking over my existence, because I persistently think of them. Its a beautiful, pure, and emotive peice of writing, that feel like its been written by the heart.
I think the way you write has gotten even better OAO Its draws me into the writing more. Idk....maybe the way you wrote the sentences or something xD
I love the way you made love seem. I probably wouldn't have thought of someone I love pretty much taking over my existence, because I persistently think of them. Its a beautiful, pure, and emotive peice of writing, that feel like its been written by the heart.