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Lost and Found

Here I am walking around aimlessly
Scars surround every part of my body
Lies are all that I seem to know
Tears no longer come out
Just the supreme silence
I walk for what seems to be forever
I lose the strength that I have to stand
I was done, I was done with trying
I wanted to sit and rot
But there you were
The flickering light in my hurt eyes
You came for me...came running
At this close to dead corpse
You whispered thoughts of hope- often true thoughts
It was never merely flattery, and overreacted words
Nor was it fake for secret intentions
It was honest, kind, true
You are the only one that makes me feel this way
Because you are the first one you found ME
I want desperately to say I love you my friend
You help in me in so many ways.

-March 2, 2012-
Ever get this feeling, with someone? Not necessarily with someone that your in love with, just with someone you hold dear?
Please tell me what you think. ^__^ Comments are welcome.

And I am back....
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this poem is Very Well Written...
I truly enjoyed reading each word.
:headbang: Two Thumbs Up ! :headbang:
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Brett-Sinclair Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Wow ! Beautiful !!!
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much. ^^
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW! OKAY! So I can really get this >///<

It's like, just before you decide to give up, not caring of the consequences, they come out of no where and then everything is in colour again. You notice the little things more (If you haven't already) and for some reason it feels easier to breathe. As if for the whole time you were breathing in water, and then suddenly, there was oxygen. You feel lighter, and more filled with energy and light :) It's like how darkness blending to light, or monochrome, exploding into colour QwQ

No matter how hard it gets you have to believe that one day someone will be able to save you like this. That someone out there is destined to be your friend/love, and to open the curtains which were kept shut for so long.

This writing is so....touching and inspiring QwQ It makes me feel like trying harder to make more friends (irl) and its so....its just so wow. It's so....yeah wow. Wow is the only way I can express it. I wish for more words to find the appropriate one but 'wow' will have to do for now.

Your writing is always so meaningful, it definitely helps many people in some way. Keep writing, kay? ;D Your
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for your amazing feed back. >.< YOOOOU ARE AMAZING DEAR!!!!!!!!
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD I'm pretty sure everyone got what it was about~! It's so emotive after all, lol! Wish I could write like you :iconblissplz:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
*O* You are making me blush when typing. THANK YOU.
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDDD lol! YOU'RE SO CUTE :iconbrohugplz:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Writer
>//////< I am not cute...
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