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Lost and Found

Here I am walking around aimlessly
Scars surround every part of my body
Lies are all that I seem to know
Tears no longer come out
Just the supreme silence
I walk for what seems to be forever
I lose the strength that I have to stand
I was done, I was done with trying
I wanted to sit and rot
But there you were
The flickering light in my hurt eyes
You came for me...came running
At this close to dead corpse
You whispered thoughts of hope- often true thoughts
It was never merely flattery, and overreacted words
Nor was it fake for secret intentions
It was honest, kind, true
You are the only one that makes me feel this way
Because you are the first one you found ME
I want desperately to say I love you my friend
You help in me in so many ways.

-March 2, 2012-
Ever get this feeling, with someone? Not necessarily with someone that your in love with, just with someone you hold dear?
Please tell me what you think. ^__^ Comments are welcome.

And I am back....
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this poem is Very Well Written...
I truly enjoyed reading each word.
:headbang: Two Thumbs Up ! :headbang:
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Brett-Sinclair Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Wow ! Beautiful !!!
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much. ^^
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW! OKAY! So I can really get this >///<

It's like, just before you decide to give up, not caring of the consequences, they come out of no where and then everything is in colour again. You notice the little things more (If you haven't already) and for some reason it feels easier to breathe. As if for the whole time you were breathing in water, and then suddenly, there was oxygen. You feel lighter, and more filled with energy and light :) It's like how darkness blending to light, or monochrome, exploding into colour QwQ

No matter how hard it gets you have to believe that one day someone will be able to save you like this. That someone out there is destined to be your friend/love, and to open the curtains which were kept shut for so long.

This writing is so....touching and inspiring QwQ It makes me feel like trying harder to make more friends (irl) and its so....its just so wow. It's so....yeah wow. Wow is the only way I can express it. I wish for more words to find the appropriate one but 'wow' will have to do for now.

Your writing is always so meaningful, it definitely helps many people in some way. Keep writing, kay? ;D Your
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for your amazing feed back. >.< YOOOOU ARE AMAZING DEAR!!!!!!!!
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD I'm pretty sure everyone got what it was about~! It's so emotive after all, lol! Wish I could write like you :iconblissplz:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Writer
*O* You are making me blush when typing. THANK YOU.
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDDD lol! YOU'RE SO CUTE :iconbrohugplz:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Writer
>//////< I am not cute...
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Ani-casma Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU ARE TOO :iconblissplz:

:iconaawplz: SO ADORABLE!
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
>/////////////< nuuuuuuuu
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Iilr Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really nice.. I wish that someone came running now and whispered thoughts of hope to me that were honest, kind and true.. -sigh-
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Writer
*hugs you* Thank you. ^^
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Iilr Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome! :hug:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
^^ :hug: s back.
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X24nekosan Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really great. I love the emotion in it
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much, i am soo glad that you liked it. ^^

Please come again. ^^
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Cyluho Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great piece of (he)art ;)
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Nawww thank you very much. ^^ That comment is awesome to me.
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Cyluho Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;)
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Red-hair-actress Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I did once. It was on the net^^ so idk, but it was pretty nice feeling^^
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
It's not that way anymore? And thank you very much! ^___^
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Red-hair-actress Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
no it isn't, but it was my fault @_____@ ...
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
...What happened?
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Red-hair-actress Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I wasb too curious. He told me too much. and I had to go
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Writer
I see.. ~
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Red-hair-actress Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So I miss him a litle bit, but I know it wil NEVER be back... It came to the past...
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
My....
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poisonous-ink Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
It's always nice to find a person you can have in such high reguard. they keep you stable they make you happy, I'm glad you've found someone like that miss Haruhi.
The writing is very beautiful. I get the feeling that this needs to be read with the thought or timing of a pulse or heartbeat in mind (just how I imagine it XD)
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much Levi. Your comment always makes me so happy to read. ^__^ I am so glad that you liked this. ^O^
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poisonous-ink Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Always a pleasure my dear. ^_^
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
*smiles* ^___^
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poisonous-ink Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
:iconbigsmileplz:
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
:iconhurrdurrplz:
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poisonous-ink Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Haha that scared me
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
What why? XD
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you found someone that can make you fell better :D You seem down all the time and hopefully now that can change ^^
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Yes, it is nice. I am glad i am better now... XD
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure I'm more glad than you XP
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Why you say that? X3
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Maj0rMareMolester Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because I'm an overly concerned citizen I guess
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
That is good I would say though. ^^
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BTHardy1993 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Nice poem.
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Whoa!! *O* Thank you very much I am glad you liked it. >w<
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BTHardy1993 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
You're welcome.
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
Please come again.
^^
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BTHardy1993 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Okay. I will.
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Saigen-naku Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Writer
^^ thank you.
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BTHardy1993 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
You're welcome.
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